Session 03
Assessment Criteria
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The complexity of the sentences you use. You should be able to use both simple and complex sentences, depending on the context and purpose of your communication. You should also avoid repeating the same sentence structures or using only basic sentences.
The variety of the grammatical structures you use. You should be able to use different types of clauses, phrases, modifiers, and connectors to create coherent and cohesive texts. You should also avoid overusing the same structures or using inappropriate ones.
Some of the aspects that are considered under grammar range and accuracy are:
- The use of different types of sentences, such as simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences.
- The use of different types of clauses, such as main clauses, subordinate clauses, relative clauses, and conditional clauses.
- The use of different types of verb forms, such as tenses, aspects, moods, and voices.
- The use of different types of modifiers, such as adjectives, adverbs, prepositions, and phrases.
- The use of different types of connectors, such as conjunctions, transitions, and linking words.
- The use of different types of punctuation, such as commas, periods, colons, semicolons, dashes, and apostrophes.
- The use of different types of word order, such as subject-verb-object, passive voice, inversion, and fronting.
- The use of different types of agreement, such as subject-verb agreement, noun-pronoun agreement, and adjective-noun agreement.
- The use of different types of articles, such as definite, indefinite, and zero articles.
- The use of different types of pronouns, such as personal, possessive, reflexive, demonstrative, and relative pronouns.
- The use of different types of determiners, such as quantifiers, numbers, and demonstratives.
- The use of different types of nouns, such as countable, uncountable, singular, plural, and collective nouns.
Weak paragraph:
Some people think government spend more money for public health not for individual treatments. I agree this opinion, because public health is good for society. Public health can stop disease, like COVID-19, it is bad for economy and people. Public health can make people healthy, like exercise, eat good, and no smoke, it can prevent disease, like diabetes, heart, and cancer. Public health can help people with problem, like poor, dirty, and unfair, it can affect health of people. So, spend more money for public health can make people live better and longer, and save money for individual treatments later.
Strong paragraph:
Some people argue that the government should spend more money on public health rather than on individual treatments. I completely agree with this view, as I believe that investing in public health can bring many benefits to the society as a whole. Firstly, public health measures can prevent the spread of infectious diseases, such as COVID-19, which can have devastating effects on the economy and the well-being of the population. Secondly, public health programs can promote healthy lifestyles and habits, such as exercising, eating well, and quitting smoking, which can reduce the risk of chronic diseases, such as diabetes, heart disease, and cancer. Thirdly, public health policies can address the social and environmental determinants of health, such as poverty, pollution, and inequality, which can have a significant impact on the health outcomes of different groups of people. Therefore, spending more money on public health can improve the quality of life and the life expectancy of the citizens, as well as save the costs of individual treatments in the long run.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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